Date: 07/15/10 03:44 pm Title: Family Ties
Amazing! Thanks again for this wonderful work :)
Date: 07/12/10 12:11 pm Title: Family Ties
Interesting... i like it!
Date: 07/10/10 08:35 pm Title: Family Ties
Well it's a start in the right direction. Tom will hopefully get his act together. And Bill got to prove to himself How strong he can actually be. And Anis was really good too he's grown up so much in such a short time. Good boy!
Date: 07/10/10 08:30 pm Title: Family Ties
Oh my what a huge mess. Tom is a serious mess!
Date: 07/10/10 02:41 am Title: Family Ties
Oh my. I Think Bushido is going to need some more conclusive evidence then supposition and veiled evidence. But yes it does seem to be pointed in Tom's direction. Best thing to do is get him a job out of he house and nanny cans to find the culprit.
Date: 07/09/10 02:46 pm Title: Family Ties
Anis is being a lsittle overprotective. I can understand not wanting to pick up Bill's pieces after Tom shreds him but it is Bill's choice to get hurt.
Date: 07/09/10 11:55 am Title: Family Ties
Are they sure they can afford that house? It makes me nervous hem.spending that much money. What is Tom doing there?!
Date: 07/09/10 05:37 am Title: Family Ties
This was a beautiful story. There was something almost...quiet about it, that made it feel very genuine. I enjoyed every part of it.
Date: 07/09/10 02:03 am Title: Family Ties
very interesting ending.
Date: 07/08/10 11:25 pm Title: Family Ties
Awww!
I hope Tom gets better.
I hope this story some how keeps going because it's amazing.
Also, good thing Tom didn't take his watch. ^^
Date: 07/08/10 10:13 pm Title: Family Ties
Aw, i've really loved this little extra bit.
Date: 07/08/10 05:24 pm Title: Family Ties
I am so angry with Tom (not even disappointed). He was so stupid and ungrateful. Bill doesn't deserve that!
I love the B's relationship *_* I wish there were more moments with them but the end is near ohhh
Date: 07/07/10 01:06 am Title: Family Ties
Wow. This is such a fabulous story. I love the plot and the characterization and EVERYTHING about it. It's so realistic and sad amazing.
Date: 07/06/10 08:59 pm Title: Family Ties
God, Tom! Fucking idiot! I'm just trying to figure out how you guys are going to wrap it all up in one more chapter... Well, if anyone can do it, you guys can!
I really loved the date Bushido and Bill had and how you write their relationship. They just seem so comfortable with each other now. Like a married couple. It's so cute :D
Date: 07/06/10 12:38 am Title: The Ties That Bind
i wish I had remembered to review BEFORE starting Family Ties -_-". It's sort of hard to say anything now without thinking of the other one.
I did like this line though. ""Nope, some woman." Bill shifts Tom to his other shoulder with a grin. "I told her you were taken.""
I thought about it today, people don't really put enough of the right type of humor into their stories. It's odd because all of the boys have quite a bit of a sense of humor, no matter how crass it is.
I like how you ended this though. I have to say I will miss the story though and all of Bushido's comments about Bill making his kids retarded. When I seen hair-dye in the story the other day I actually thought about this story, it made me giggle.
I like the way it progressed from Bill sitting outside a club, trying to find Bushido again to Bill getting weed from him for his mom, all the way to a relationship.
The realism of it was nice too. Bushido's reaction was good and how he handled it was even better.
Bill losing his mom was real sad though, especially after everything.
I know this is expanding a but from this story but I would really like to see more into this world. Learn more about the pasts of everyone, and more of the futures too.
Date: 07/06/10 12:26 am Title: Family Ties
Geez...damn.
That must be hard on Bill. To have to kick out your sibling who you love and adore. To find find him doing drugs with your kids around. How intense.
Date: 07/05/10 02:49 pm Title: Family Ties
I'm so sad for Tom even if we saw this coming in the other chapter...
Date: 07/05/10 05:44 am Title: Family Ties
*Hugs Tom tightly, smacks him in the head, hugs him tighter* Why did you do that?! I wanted you to have a happy ending in this story!